I can't believe the man!
"You know you're such a loser Jake!" Haley was smoking mad.He had no right to butt in her relationship with Carter!
"And you are a lady that deserves more than that loser Camron!"Camron? What the hell?!
"And who do you think I deserve huh?" Haley countered back furiously
"Me."
*So yeah why don't you just try and tell me my remarkable flaws of my writing...please?*
Mia's life isn't very normal , she's a blood sucking girl who goes to a school full of blood sucking people , but when she can't contain the thirst of blood anymore , she gets really messy