Sundered Stories

Fool's Errand is the first chaper of the novel I never finished. It's also the foundation stone on which my first novel, The Dancing Sword of Ulm, was built. When I started redrafting the book after some very helpful tips from local author Richard Maynard, I threw out almost all of the original work - plot and characters. (You can read about the hows and whys in my blog posts, here - http://kathytstorys.blogspot.com.au/2016/04/on-fantasy-writing-and-role-playing_22.html The Dancing Sword has yet to be published. I'm working on that. In the meantime I've been looking over my old drafts while doing a tidy up. There's still the core of a story there, a different tale. So I thought some readers might be interested to see what the original was like. And when I do publish, they may also like to pick out the little details from the first work that survived to make it into the final novel. It's certainly been fascinating for me. The original story was based on a Dungeons and Dragons campaign I'd run, and the surviving chapters, with a little touching up, does round out to a complete story in itself. The story, like the novel, is set in my own Fantasy world, which I call the Sundered Land. I'll post it in sections with the second chapter, The Tower to come later. Hope you enjoy it.

***Disclaimer, this is my first real story I know it's bad but I want to get better so suggestions are welcome***Sophron the god of wisdom fell from grace after committing the crime of hubris ( believed he became the ultimate arbiter of truth and wisdom) and wishes to go back to the sundered pantheon after a millennia of emprisonnement. But he is not alone to have such an idea. Will he really ascend back to the heavens or will he live his life as a mortal once more?

Legends whisper of the Sundered - beings who walked between bloodlines, unbound by the Veil's laws. Their existence was forbidden. Their names erased. Silas Sibley, a broke audiophile, wakes up as the first Vampiric Witch in over two centuries after a bite from a stranger. Now hunted by vampires who fear his blood, witches who crave his power, and Nephilim who call him an abomination, Silas uncovers a buried truth: He's not the first hybrid. The Sundered have returned. And their war has already begun.

Y/N is the quirkless son of the Number 1 hero Allmight. Of course, if the public found out Allmight's child is quirkless his reputation would drop, so when he had the chance he took his son to a place far away. Where nobody would find him. What happens to the young 5 years old boy? Will he survive and come back for revenge. Or will he fail and disappear? (Gifs and music is not mine and I give credit to their respective creators. (but some screenshots are from my gameplay.))