Survivalandwar Stories

Just a beginner story I'm letting mind and creativity do the work tell me how I'm doing some far feel free to leave some tips for my next book I'm going to be writing

In the heart of a distant star lies a planet like no other-Aeronis. Vast, polluted, and perpetually frozen, its frigid smog blankets megacities ruled by ruthless corporations. The air is toxic, the landscape desolate, and the people-alien. Three species fight for dominance on Aeronis: the Vyrexi, near-humans with glowing eyes and shimmering skin, masters of technology and energy; the Thareen, reptilian warriors with strange spiritual powers that can manipulate life itself; and the Mechari, AI-human hybrids whose cold, calculating minds control the flow of data and war. As the planet teeters on the brink of destruction, alliances shift, betrayals lurk in every corner, and a power hidden deep beneath the frozen surface could change everything. Step into a world where the cold is as lethal as the enemy, and survival means navigating a brutal conflict that spans icy megacities, industrial wastelands, and corporate warfare. The future is cold, but the war for power is burning hot. Prepare for an immersive, action-packed journey where survival means mastering the frozen heart of Aeronis.