Symbolistic Stories

No one wants to read it :( I am a terrible writer😖 A short story filled with symbolism with a dark theme. This is my first try at writing fiction so please criticize it and help me improve my writing. Thanks in advance

Hello everyone! :) This is my poetry collection and I decided to publish it so I can let all these unspoken words and feelings out of the constricting walls of my computer and phone :D I started writing poems when I was still in high school and they cover a diverse range of emotions and thoughts :) I'll be absolutely thrilled and will be jumping in the air if you decide to give me some feedback and show some love ^^

Short story. A world where birth to eighteen years old you are the ugliest thing in the world. Teens struggle to survive the government and them selves.