Teenswithpowers Stories

So I would like some feedback on some stuff for a book I plan on writing. I need help with Character creation, and stuff like that.

Rebel, Robb, Jem and Dan have been friends since childhood. So, naturally, when they're kidnapped, all four of them are taken. But when only two escape, a plan is needed...

Lauren is plainly a girl who got abandoned by her mum. That's normal right? She lives with her aunt in Liverpool now and her favourite place to go is Camelot Theme Park...

"We can't do this.. This won't be a human being, just figures of mass that breathe!" "Would you stop yelling? It'll work, and it'll be the greatest human...

Jay and his friend are wealthy, careless, reckless and then are given this huge responsibility of mutations. Mutations like mind control and seeing the future mess with...