Testingwriting Stories

This story is just an experiment to test my writing skills writing science fiction. This story is about a space cowboy, Arden. Retrieving a golden treasure from planet Earth, Africa for his gang, the Greyhounds. In this universe gold is used by a species called the Kram to restore cells in their body to peak health, giving them a brand new life, not immortal, but enough to last another lifetime. Let me know what you think!

Yes that's right I can actually write stuff I exist I'm no longer a literal ghost heheheha