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AMAZING COVER BY @sisa9999 <><><><><><><><><> WARNING: There may be some cursing and scenes that is not suitable for everyone. <><><><><><><><><> "Farewell my old friend" He whispered sadly as he threw the flower on the coffin. "Hah, he thought a moon devil would be killed that easily? What an idiotic beta" whispered a man behind him, with a smile on his face. The only thing Levi ever wanted is to be free; yet, not all the wants are good. Now the only thing he needs is to be forgiven by 'him'. <><><><><><><><> TheFreedomAwards2017

You are a captive. They'll get nothing out of you, not a single word, because you'll die before you tell them anything. He is determined to break his captive- he needs the information and he'll find out what he wants to know by any means necessary. It's a battle of wills. You versus him with everything you care about caught in the middle. ---------------- AWARDS *Best Flow (Melancholy Awards) *Battlefield Award (Descriptions that make you feel as if you're in the story) *3rd Place Short Story (Seraph Awards) *1st Place Short Story (The Queen Awards: Monthly) *2nd Place Short Story (The Flavored Awards) * 98.9/100 score on Neverland Reviews (https://www.wattpad.com/596949050-neverland-reviews-divided-%E2%80%A2sscott8%E2%80%A2). Credit for the picture goes to one♥two aka gudrun on Flickr's Creative Commons. Credit for the story goes to me... so no plagiarism. Any similarities to other works, other characters, other descriptions, and real life cases is not intentional. Please enjoy reading, and if there's something you see that is noteworthy (good or bad), let me know. I'm on this website to improve my craft, not get votes.

Things that were fallen apart were just pulling together to repair but they shatter into much more tiny pieces when Kate, the only Daughter of the Dawson Family gets strange, and mysterious letters from an unknown person about her family's past and a creepy old house that had left scars on her parent's hearts. Unaware about anything at all, she makes up her mind to put back all of this pieces in place and meanwhile, Ken her best-friend who always had a soft corner for her, gets himself tangled up around her wrecked journey. The only way to decipher all this lies just in one thing; The diary. What is the secret holding back her family? Would they find the diary? Is Ken's love strong enough to stand by her? Stick around and read to be a part of the journey filled with amazing characters, some romance, mystery, twists, suspense and some heart-stopping thrill.

A brutal war. A girl raised as a proud soldier, all too willing to fight and die for her country. A man whose life has been shattered, remade into one of fear and rage and hate. A boy who is caught in the web of politics, who experiences horrible things not meant for anyone, much less a child as young as he. This is a tale of two countries at war, and the lives of the people who reside there, featuring some supernatural powers, heavy religion, and some quite frankly terrible people. The story and its characters are my creation; any similarity to other works or to current events is not intended. Plagiarism is not acceptable... honestly, have a bit of self-respect. I don't particularly care if you vote for this work or not. My only desire is feedback so that I can become a better writer. AWARDS * FGU Awards November: Best Death Scene (1st Place). * Drill Sergeant Award (Best Dialogue). * Seraph Awards: Honorable Mention. * Snowflake Awards: 2nd Place, Fantasy. REVIEWS https://www.wattpad.com/550562523-honest-book-reviews-forever-closed-the-balance

[Highest rank: #36 in poetry ] Winner of The Profound Awards Winner of The Imagination Awards Winner of a special award called The Yeat's Award A collection of poems about pain, love, suffering and strength.

[Sample of published book] Welcome, to the sizable world of Pocket Dragons. For thousands of years, the Pocket Dragons have been sharing the Earth with humans. Spread out all over the world, they survive in the cities, in forests, in places frozen cold and places blazing hot. To some peoples, the dragons are gods to be worshipped. To others, they are pests to be wiped out. Yet so far, the two sentient races have managed to coexist. Until now. Dragons are vanishing from the streets. The deities and pets alike of the humans are being snatched away. No one knows why the magical creatures are vanishing, and unfortunately, very few of the humans care. Then, four dragons from all over the world are captured and brought together. Isis, from Egypt, Angus, from Ireland, Frida, from Siberia, and Azara, from London. Together, they are determined to find out what is happening to the missing dragons and why - and figure out how to stop it - before all of pocket dragon kind disappears completely. ~~~ Highest was 307 in Fantasy! 1st place in Blue Rose Awards! Third place winner of the Seasonal Awards! Cover by the amazing @Niranju98! [Completed!]

It was slowly becoming apart of Elena Piers. It hid within her sanity. It clawed through her normalities. It chased her existence into lies. It trailed her, hushed at night, melting into the darkness only dancing in the flickering light. It was an echo of her movements, it shadowed her, it was becoming her. But how could you get rid of your reflection? *used to be called Mirrors*

"I turned to look all around me as I finished singing. The ghosts around me started to smile. And after that, I too, slowly began to smile. Then, they attacked." Harley Parker lives a life unlike any other. She can see the ghosts, shades, and wraiths that haunt this world. When she receives a mysterious letter from a notorious ghost, she must uncover the clues. Along with a shade, she must find out what has been hidden from the world. But with Death lurking around every corner, can she uncover the mystery? Or rather, even live through this perilous adventure? (Book 1 in the Vengeful Series) Amazing cover made by @-stellae -1st Place in the Purple Awards -Honorable Mention in the Quill Awards -Hidden Gem Award in the Rarity Awards -2nd Place in the Have a Chance Contest -1st Place in the Lunar Awards for Best Supporting Character -Honorable Mention in the Lucent Awards -2nd Place in the AnyElseWhere Awards -2nd Place in the Ammon Awards -Best Grammar in the Ammon Awards