Timestandsstill cerita

Many people know of Ñolofinwë and Fëanáro, but few know of their past life together. They were not brothers off blood, but one found a brother in the other. Sadly, all the other thought of was his younger brother, the usurper. Lord of all Noldor A star in the night And a bearer of hope He rides into his glorious battle alone Farewell to the valiant warlord

It's kind of cheesy, but I'd be happy for your opinion!!! It's about a boy and girl who find love using a timer and fate.