Tristanandrory Stories

Tristan had always teased Rory at school. She knew it was just his personality. But after an accidental kiss at a party, everything changed...

What's up my dude's... I'm sorry lol. Moving on this is the first thing i will ever publish so if one day i make it big everyone will look back on this, that's kinda scary anyway. I will now give a summary of the first 1 1/2 chapters (bc that's all i have written yet). Idk if you can edit descriptions later on but if you can i will elaborate, OK HERE IT IS After Tristan asks Rory to go to PJ Harvey she runs of with Tristan following close behind, once they make it to her stop and the bus it's there Rory have a mental breakdown. Tristan comforts her and drives her to ihop for an after school snack. After late lunch they head to stars hollow where a surprise guest was waiting for them....to be continued Ok so what did you think, ya it wasn't great but I really want YOUR fead back. I have the outline for the story but if there is a detailed that i should add pls comment it. I'm am a VERY new "writer" If you could call me that so for the story to be good i need you help/criticism. Btw I don't own the rights to the Gilmore girls characters/Gilmore girls story line. However i do own the rights to all creative story line.

Rory not even in her wildest dreams did ever expect to kiss Tristan Dugray of all people at a high school party. Neither did she expect to get her heart broken by him or fall in love with him for that matter, but fate sure does have a weird way of working things out. Or Follow the journey of Tristan Dugray and Rory Gilmore as they slowly but surely fall in love with each other over the years.