Historias de Udeceye

One of the Elite Udeceye, Ilka, takes shelter from a generating Udeceye and goes into deep slumber. When she wakes up, the world has changed, and her species is in great danger. **** (Don't expect this to be great! I am only fourteen years old, and I am just an amateur in writing :0 Please give me advice on how to write better, and point out my grammatical mistakes!)