Un-edited Stories

This is an un-edited poem ish thing I wrote when I had writers block to get rid of writers block.

Olivia and Her friends are just a bunch of 'Normal' Teenage girls, they Laugh alot and constally tease each other. but what happens when 5 boys barrel into their lives out of the blue? and not just any regular 5 boys, but the one and Olny, One Direction Boys. Can Livy(Group Leader) keep the groups sane enough to be aronud or will she crack underneath the pressure? what happens when she starts having feelings, for one of the boys? Dont blink-because it'll change with quicker than a blink of an eye. When everything in Olivia's life seems to be too good to be real and everything seem's to be perfect and calm-mother nature thorws in a curve ball and takes olivia's blind side. sending her in a downward spiral. will she be able to get through it or will she go back mermory lane and repeat the past...her past. and who will be there to save her in the end? and will Louie ever learn to stop wearing his dancing carrot boxers aroudn the girls who will surely take pictures and upload them to instagram? (IN EDITING!) -ThatOlivia :)

Yo. This is some writing I did a while ago. It turned out alright so I decided to share it here. Keep in mind, this is unedited and was written in a month (for a month-long writing challenge). The story is sort of a suspense, mystery-type thing.

we do a lot of these in English. most of them we write for 10-15 minutes straight, so they're un-cut, & un-edited. some aren't really good, so I don't post them.. but I post the ones that I think are okay :)

So this is a fantasy story. I'm not quite sure how it will end, but I promise you it will be awesome. I'm gonna try to write a lot. You have to actually read it if you looked at this. Please. You can't judge a book by its cover. And I'm not so sure about the title. I just need something to call it. And I will try to keep my grammar at its best. Thx