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I honestly want your guys's opinion on this. Is it good? Is it bad? Do I need to elaborate on certain things? Do I need to change or add anything?

this story is inspired by a korean drama.. but it never happened to me honestly... this is drama,lovestory,partly adventure(of life) and horror(joke) THE CHARACTERS: ANGELICA"ANGELA" SANTIAGO the illegitimate daughter MARC OLIVER "MARCO" SMITH angela's bestfriend MATILDA JASSEN MONTENIGRO angela's other sister MARIANNA MONTENIGRO angela's wicked grandmother JOSE ANGELO MONTENIGRO III angela's father ANGELINA SANTIAGO angela's mother JACKY CRUZ angela's yaya MARIO JOHN SMITH marco's father LORRIANE MONTENIGRO mother of matilda,recently angela's step mother MORE COMING CHARACTERS

this is story is actually a bit confusimg but you will understand it cause in this story rapunzel and hiccup are together then merida likes eugene who likes anna who likes kristoff who likes elsa who is falling for jack who is inlove with elsa too just understand the situation thank you