Universeofthedead Stories

Probably just gonna post the first chapter. Second drafts are still early stage so bare with me this isn't 100% polished, but !!!! I'm happy w/ it [& happy that it nearly doubled in word length !!!]

Four living beings make their way into the universe of the dead. A few of the residents have to help them make it out alive. Unfortunately, 2/4 of the people needed to properly help them are unavailable. They have to find them before the 4 living die, w/o getting found out by the ruler of the land. Also this is a first draft so please ignore the plethora of: Punctuation errors, Spelling Mistakes, Grammatical Errors, etc