Vayla Stories

This is mark 9 of 'An Echo in time'. My story revolves around Note, a super solider from the year 3100, and his struggle with the Echo people, who desire to exterminate humanity. This is more to keep a record of my older writing so that I have a reference point to look upon. I write to have fun and improve, and I can only improve by knowing what I'm doing wrong. I strive to write at my peak and will continue to push forward in my style and language, although I know that my characters are not what they could be, and I'm looking for ways to improve who and what they are.