Vinile Stories

For an English test I had to write a story from somewhere. I really liked how it came out so I wanted to share it somewhere. I'm not sure if there are mistakes, also because I don't excel in English (ps I'm Italian, that's not an excuse obv but it's to say that it's not even my mother tongue). Soooo nothing, let me know if you like it and, I don't know, do you also want the Italian version? However, I would like to know your views on the story💗 ✨good reading✨