Vocalstatic Stories

I'm writing a Hazbin Hotel fanfic for ao3, but I wanted community opinions. I know where the story will get and how it will end, but I want to see how it actually run in the raw draft chapters. The story is inspired heavily by the song 'Brighter' from s2ep7. I want to play around with the characters after not writing anything in 2 years. They have too nice of designs to waste and the era is between 1930 to 1952. Their deaths felt too one and done, so I wanted to see how I could bend and break them without a word limit or limit on the amount of changes and liberty I make. I had realized my happiness over my interests should have to be bashed by a man.