Wakening Stories

This is just my first chapter, looking for feedback. A young boy witnesses a murderous ritual that awakens an ancient evil, as well as something that has been hibernating inside himself.

"Nothing in life lasts forever except for death which is eternal."

"Do you love the rain that much?"He asked. I smiled and nodded. I'm always in awe of how beautiful rain can be,especially what it brings to me. Every time the cold wind touches my skin and how the raindrops give pure happiness to me because of how it knows me. " You never know how much it brings me joy" "But what if when the rain stops?..What do you feel?" He was seriously looking at me and waiting for my answer. Why is he taking it seriously? I moved to my side and stared at him before I spoke. "The rain stops and still create a masterpiece.A beautiful creation of colors. Even when the rain stops, the aftermath of it gives me hope and new reason to be live again.To still think of how beauty to be alive. Amazing isn't?" He smiled sweetly and look to the other side. " I am more amazed how poetic you are to yourself..."

What if you woke up 300 years too late-and humanity was no longer the dominant species? W33P awakens in a pod, stripped of her past and surrounded by machines that treat her like an asset, not a person. The world she once knew is gone. Earth has become an alien machine-organism, ruled by logic, silence, and control. Humans-those who remain-are little more than ghosts in a system they no longer understand. But W33P remembers something no one else does: what it means to be free. What it means to fight. As she descends into the dark heart of Sector Nine, she discovers a hidden resistance and a place the machines fear-the Root Well. Secrets lie beneath the surface. And W33P may hold the key to humanity's final chance. A gripping dystopian sci-fi saga of memory, resistance, and the fight to reclaim what makes us human. How would you feel reading this-if you knew it was written by AI?