Wewill قصص

"The clouds move closer... even the world tilts. Look high on the sky on this Zelda night... There was comet so strange and rare... The comet you see has been here before... At least a million years ago. Deep into the forest... There is mythical creatures....

Thank you. (PruCan)

Vien's.

Hi i am new to this if you read this let me know how i did. This is a horrible made up story i wrote about a girl named kelly. No one is probably going to read this. But i am just starting out in a writing career which i plan to succeed in but any feed back will be nice.