What-do-you-think Stories

I have a great story in mind and am interested in putting out there. However, I do not want to publish it if no one is interested in reading it. So I will give you guys the prologue and if you want me to continue writing, please vote on it and write a comment. Tell me what you think. If I don't get enough to matter I will not be continuing. I really do love the story plot so...please vote and comment. Thank you!