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[ ] Open! [X]Closed for Catch-up I'm a writer and editor by profession who would love to help out some smaller writers! If interested, open this book up and follow the instructions there.

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Looking for someone to review your story and correct spelling, grammar, and formatting errors? Sometimes, when we read our own texts, we miss some mistakes, but I'm here to help improve your story! I'm an experienced beta reader and offer constructive feedback on: • Spelling • Grammar • Formatting • Story consistency If you're ready to improve your story and receive detailed feedback, comment below or send me a direct message! I'm available to help writers of all genres. If you'd like to swap feedback and review each other's stories, just let me know!

Introduction to Readers This 2,000-word excerpt from my sci-fi novel spans the second half of Chapter 1 and the first half of Chapter 2, set in a dynamic university. Larja, an astrophysicist professor, and Sarah, his PhD student and assistant, head from a lecture hall to Merian's office, where another professor supervises Sarah's thesis. Their interactions hint at cosmic stakes, but I'm seeking feedback on prose and language, how they flow, and whether they are natural and smooth. Please share your thoughts on writing style in the comments, avoiding plot or logic. For detailed critique or beta reading interest, comment or DM me! © Sam Lurian 2025, All Rights Reserved.