Internally Dead
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Complete Fri, Nov 22, 2013<5 mins
We did a whole unit on WWI poetry in school and I though I just had to write a piece. This poems depicts the horrors of being trapped inside a body that has been changed so much because the unforgettable sights of war that it is no longer yours. This poem is merely an interpretation of what I think you'd be feeling in this situation and is not in any way designed to offend anyone.
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