the first glance

the first glance

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meet McKenzie, though a lot if people call her kenzie. she's 17 and lives in Hawaii with her sister. she has brown hair and hazel eyes. her best friends name is Ashley. she doesn't have a boyfriend and isn't planning on having one. anyways her sister is 24 and her name is brianna. she is currently working at the newest clothing store called Romeo and Juliet. she has a boyfriend named Ryan who is super sweet they've known each other for 9 years and started dating 7 months ago. they're pretty serious about they're relationship. the reason kenzie and her sister live together is because their dad is gone a lot on business trips and their mom died when kenzie was 9 and bri was 16. she died in a car accident by a drunk driver. their dad comes home whenever he can but not that often maybe once a month. kenzie has always found love so stupid or that's what she tells everybody. the real reason is because she thinks that love builds you up to tear you down. _______________________________________ i glanced over the crowd of people and my eyes were glued to this perfect guy. he had dark brown hair and icy blue eyes. he started staring at me too and i realized that one of bri's friends was nudging me with her elbow and i quickly looked away from this beautiful boy. i couldn't think of anything else right now. was he looking at me 'cause he thought i was pretty? did i have something on my face? maybe he just had one of those times when you keep staring at something and your eyes have a mind of their own? or maybe he just likes me. or maybe my hair looks retarted! oh man! i bet it does! as soon as i heard the 'i do' i knew i had to find this boy.
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Chloe Clarkson is 15 years old and lives with her 10 older, overprotective, defensive, annoying brothers who will stop at nothing to keep her safe. When Chloe was six her mother and her father took Chloe to her dance competition but on their way home they got into an accident sadly her parents died leaving the oldest brother, Tom in charge. Since then Chloe has dealt with many mental health issues such as anxiety, depression and bipolar disorder. Chloe's anxiety is so bad she has a stutter when she is away from home, isn't with her brothers and when she isn't with her friends. She has an anxiety attack almost everyday. One day her and her brother fight leading to her family falling into a ditch. Finally Chloe is fed up of her family fighting and forgives. Everything comes out but when her brothers react speechless to a sad memory Chloe tell she takes it as a sign in a bad way. Chloe takes a step into water. Her brothers have to say a goodbye? They don't know is she'll wake up. Chloe is in hospital lifeless and her family and friends surround her.. Will she wake up or will she take a trip to her parents? A new guy in class? The bad boy starts getting me involved? A new group of friends? What happens when things start to turn over for Chloe? She becomes more confident and gains more trust. But as the same time she cracks. It's a bumpy ride but she has plenty of help along the way- lets just hope her brothers don't interfere to much on the ride. Warning may be triggering involves; eating disorders, self harm, anxiety, bullying, violence and bad language. I do not influence these in any way and self harm is not the answer. If anyone needs to talk I'm always here as I have had my fair share of bad doings xxxxx

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