The Child Detective
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Last published Sun, Dec 10, 2017
Children
Irresponsible, not clever, needing to be cared for more than others.
At least that's what adults think, and what adults lead us to think.
Okay, so maybe we do need a little more caring for, but what makes us more fragile? And how are we supposed to get responsibility, when people won't give us tasks because we are not responsible enough? There are many adults out there who drink and drive, so what makes us stupid compared to adults?
Amy Peterson, clever and smart adults say, but no smarter than you or I, (except maybe at science depending on how good you are ) Amy Peterson, the child detective. It was just simple work, helping in the lab, interning, and learning a lot.
Then she got promoted, an inspector in the force. She goes and questions children, children are more comfortable talking to other children than adults. Amy was the best protected, not well kept, secret the police force had.
Then she gets involved in a case. The police want to keep her away but she resists.
How will the story end?
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