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Ongoing, First published Feb 22, 2017
Children

Irresponsible, not clever, needing to be cared for more than others.

At least that's what adults think, and what adults lead us to think.

Okay, so maybe we do need a little more caring for, but what makes us more fragile? And how are we supposed to get responsibility, when people won't give us tasks because we are not responsible enough? There are many adults out there who drink and drive, so what makes us stupid compared to adults?

Amy Peterson, clever and smart adults say, but no smarter than you or I, (except maybe at science depending on how good you are ) Amy Peterson, the child detective. It was just simple work, helping in the lab, interning, and learning a lot.

Then she got promoted, an inspector in the force. She goes and questions children, children are more comfortable talking to other children than adults. Amy was the best protected, not well kept, secret the police force had. 

Then she gets involved in a case. The police want to keep her away but she resists.

How will the story end?
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Meet Kyle and Kate, two 15 year old students who have a gift for thinking fast, quick, and smart. Oh, and meet the other 18 kids in their class. Some call them genius, some call them annoying. PART 1 The year starts off bad enough, that is, with earthquakes and snowstorms. And finally, when things starts to clear up, the first murder occurs. Right in front of their eyes. It seemed obvious who did it, but as the murderer wrote her confession, a completely different murder occurs across town. Shocked, the police rush over to gather the evidence and clues, but before they even assemble their evidence, the police are led to another death. One by one, deaths occur around town, faster than the police can count. There's not much in common with all of the murders, only the fact that all of the victims come from one class. In the course on one year, the class of 18 shrinks drastically. PART 2 As summer vacation begins, the remains of the class split. Five students tell their stories of meeting new people, near death experiences, and funny incidences. PART 3 More than what meets the eye happened in the course of the summer. The class comes back to a new year, utterly shocked to find that 4 new students have joined their class. Everything starts out alright, but people are getting frantic. The government sent in spies to watch the class for suspicious behavior, two of them students themselves. Two other students are hired to try to figure things out on their own. What nobody realizes however, is what's important. As the year goes on, some of the students realize: -A secret passageway may not be limited to only the house. -The school has a basement -Falling down a flight of stairs can save lives A supposedly dead student wakes up from a coma, people start realizing things, all leading to the final, seemingly unimportant clue, that closed the gap from arresting the wrong person, to finding the real murderer.