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!!*FIRST PERSON NARITIVE*!!
This is a story about a young male called Jordan Pityworth who has a fairly decent life, with a nice house to live in with caring family members, He lives with his Mother, Katie, a strong independent woman who has nice green emerald eyes with a tint of amber mixed in and lovely brown curly hair.he also has a young brother called Lance who is 10, with blue ice cold eyes like a frozen lake and has short blonde hair which is so glossy and flawless you are sure its fake. Of course his life isn't PERFECT, he has a bit of anxiety issues, but it doesn't stop him from doing everday tasks, hes always had the ambition to become a detective, and the days comes when he can "fufill" his dream...