Carve the Mark (Alternate Ending)
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The characters and setting belong to the brilliant Veronica Roth. This is just an alternate to what really happens.
SPOILERS AHEAD!!!
What would've happened if Yma didn't give Ryzek the potion and Akos didn't defeat Vas. This is an alternate twist to the amphitheater scene where Cyra and Ryzek fight.
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