Premortal
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MatureOngoing11h 22m
Last published Tue, Sep 5, 2017
Imagine that before you were born you had another life that you can no longer remember. Welcome to 'premortal' - the book of life before living....
Initially, this premortal world is peaceful and uncomplicated. A clear blueprint has been devised for the mortal journey and there is harmony between spirits.
Most of these spirits are preparing diligently for their time on earth, but those who have not been so diligent gradually begin to realise that they are falling behind, and that their neglect may be detrimental to their future.
Taking advantage of this weakness, one power-hungry spirit proposes a counterfeit plan that is specifically designed to appeal to the slothful, as well as those who share his thirst for power.
So persuasive is this dark spirit that he ultimately threatens to take complete control and, with his perverse plan, skew the destiny of all mankind.
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