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Kumpleto, Unang na-publish Feb 25, 2017
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The Standouts - A Critique Contest by PAULAPDX (Summer 2019 Edition) ni paulapdx
6 mga parte Kumpleto
🛑 - CLOSED until 2021. ***If you're interested in my critiques, you might want to check out my weekly newsletter for opportunities to get a personalized critique. https://paula.substack.com/p/coming-soon Does your work stand out in an overly-crowded landscape? Does your story & writing shine as far as: ★ - Concept ★ - Voice ★ - Storytelling The Standouts is a fun, but hopefully helpful contest that can give you a sense of whether your story resonates with someone who's got some experience under her belt. Great! But who are you to judge? Fair question. This is not to humble-brag, but I've been critiquing and have worked with story development for quite some time, and I've picked up a lot along the way. ☙ - As an Ambassador, I work on content projects. ☙ - If you look at my profile, you'll see everything I've published so far has managed to standout in one way or another, whether by leading me to become a Wattpad Star; or by winning a Watty (twice!); or by being picked as a Top 10 in major Wattpad contests (twice!); or being featured. All I'm saying is I'm no slouch. I'm not brilliant either. But I've got some experience around what can catch an agent, editor, or judge's eye, and I'd like to share that with the community. ☙ - In another lifetime, I used to work for HBO in Development and at ICM (the talent agency) in their writers' department which means I understand how professionals quickly gauge whether or not they'll take a closer look at a work and/or make an offer. This kind of insight can be helpful if you're planning to submit your work or even just want to stand out more here on Wattpad. ☙ - I used to provide critiques for three writers, all of them traditionally published. They seemed to value my insight. Read the RULES, LOGISTICS & PRIZES chapter for guidelines. All entries get a brief assessment of their first chapter, with winners getting more extensive critiques. Sound interesting? Give it a go! 😊
Blades and Blossoms ni tor1suku
8 parte Ongoing
Ana, isang simpleng babae na nakatira sa magulo at maduming lugar sa city. Introvert siya, walang kaibigan, pero writer naman. Ang unang story niya? Blades and Blossoms-isang fantasy-action na puno ng mga tao na may powers na tinatawag na Charms. One night, natapos niya yung Chapter 2 ng story niya. Pagod na siya, so uminom siya ng sleeping pill para makatulog. Pero paggising niya? Boom! Nasa loob na siya ng mismong kwento niya! Hindi pa tapos ang story niya, pero ngayon, kailangan niyang mabuhay sa mundo na siya mismo ang gumawa. Habang naghahanap siya ng paraan para makabalik sa totoong mundo, unti-unti niyang naiintindihan na ang kwento niya... hindi lang basta kwento. Would she find her way out-or would she rewrite her destiny entirely?
Book 1✔️ Sugar Baby ni LoveLiveLust
8 parte Kumpleto Mature
Highest Ranking #1 adultthemes (01/05/19) #1 eroticromance (24/10/2019) #1 adultromance (26/06/2019) #1 sugardaddy (05/08/2019) #1 couple (16/08/2019) #1 mature (16/10/2019) #2 romance (2/11/2019) #2 ceo (23/03/2020) "You need to shut up baby. Let me take care of your needs. Can you do that for me?" He unzipped my dress, as it falls freely down to the floor. ***** Lori was a socialite, she lived a life of luxury until her parents got a divorce and she was forced to live on her own. She struggled with financing her education and trying hard to maintain her high standard of living. She finally gave up when her best friends treated her like she has the plague and cut her off, then her boyfriend was forced to end things with her when his parents didn't want him to be associated with Lori because of her family's scandal. And that's when she decided to take the offer to be a sugar baby, thinking she'll treat it as a summer job and end it as soon as she's back on her feet again. ********** James never needed a girlfriend. He's a workaholic. He likes the arrangement of a sugar baby where he can pay a sum of money for a companion of a young attractive woman. His friend suggested the idea. With the last sugar baby being too attached to him. It's time for him to find another one. A less demanding one. His eyes locked into the beautiful fragile young woman with an attitude to match. Her fiery yet nervous attitude was refreshing for him, and he wanted her for himself. Will he get what he paid for? Will she get back on her feet? ********** Completed: May 2019 *Warning! R-Rated for 18+ due to strong, explicit language and sexual content*.
Me Before YOU - BSD ✔ ni w_kai1
18 parte Kumpleto Mature
[ COMPLETED ] "𝙝𝙚 𝙛𝙚𝙖𝙧𝙨 𝙡𝙤𝙤𝙨𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙢𝙮 𝙧𝙚𝙨𝙥𝙚𝙘𝙩, 𝙄 𝙛𝙚𝙖𝙧 𝙗𝙚𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙗𝙤𝙪𝙣𝙙 𝙩𝙤 𝙝𝙞𝙢" Reminder: ⚠️ Various BSD x Male Reader/Executive Male Reader insert Angst + Romance 3/3 acts completed Started: 24/03/2022 Ended: 12/10/2022 Being his superior is truely making you tired He attempted to break free, but the fall was once again a never-ending loop. For the male, the pain was bearable, but for you, it was excruciating. But it wasn't your predicament that occurred; it was his. Dazai's circumstances has not yet devolved into hopelessness. He doubted about the height and the vulnerability of his physique before to the crash. He'd be still on the ground, surrounded by horrified citizens. Coughs of blood erupted when the horrors were committed. Even though you were there with your eyes open, all you could see was black. Your vision was unaffected. You were relieved that he was okay since his body sprang to its feet as if nothing had happened, but were you? Those dreadful memories flood your mind at random intervals, causing you to lose concentrate on the tasks you were given. You've become too soft, and you've taken on too much responsibility for yourself. Falling down when leaning against a wall. You tied your breathing while holding your head to your knees. You were known as the Port Mafia's key, the Port Mafia's answer, and the Port Mafia's power source. You, on the other hand, wanted the solution for yourself. Why can't you answer your own questions if you've answered queries from others honestly? You were curious as to why and how you had become so mentally weakened. #bsdangst 01/08/2023 #510 bsd 31/03/2022 #322 bsd 06/04/2022 #300 bsd 07/04/2022 #20 atsushinakajima 08/04/2022 #18 atsushinakajima 11/04/2022 #11 bsdxreader 07/05/2022 #36 armeddetectiveagency 08/08/2022 #51 bsd 11/08/2022
Chasing the Taste of Dims ni she_wreites
10 parte Kumpleto
"Love is just a taste, it will never be given to you fully." It's a perfect relationship under the moonlight before. No farewells, no separations and no break ups, only these words, "I love you, moon." Until the time came when distance had set them apart. Changes are inevitable for these lovers but also, they are still there... stucked in every dim and can't really move on. Hindi na nila maibabalik ang kahapon, pero maaari ba nilang subukan ngayon? O maghihintay pa ba sila ng susunod pang panahon? Xelleinna Blaze Ashford, a girl writer who isn't to chase but the one to be chased. Every single dim with the alluring moon, she was chased by the man who is the victim of her reckless decision in life. Ngunit posible pa nga bang mahulog ulit ang puso kahit pa na, wasak at durog na ang mga bahagi nito? At kung oo, is it also possible that the fate will turn their tragic start into a happy ending? Sa isang gabi, isang saknong. Her new obsession-no nights on failing to express what she feel through this unfinished poetry. Pero paano kung ang bawat gabing ipinagkakaloob na muli, ay patikim lang pala ng tadhana? Paano kung pansamantala lang pala? O paano kung siya naman ang kailangang maghabol? And what if she did chased yet had reached the dead end, without meeting her love in the middle of her steps? Or just even in the end of that walk? The moon above stayed for the sixth dim. But her own moon... didn't. Is this the last taste which the dim will let her chase? Is the chase already over? So as the taste of every dim? Ipagpapatuloy pa rin ba ang pagsulat ng kuwentong siya na lang ang bida? "For I am that girl who tasted love again, under the moonlight. And that girl who would still... chase... chase... and chase for another chance of taste with you in every dim." Let this back to back masterpiece take you in the ambiance of tranquil and comforting ground of New Zealand. And experience how does it feel when you are chasing the taste of dims under the moonlight.
Luminaria ni Wrifeima
42 parte Ongoing
Morinathia Rosales lived for the thrill of luxury - designer labels, champagne toasts, and flawless skin. To her, happiness always came with a price... until the price turned out to be her life. Waking up in a world unknown, she finds herself in the body of a royal - not on a throne, but in chains. From glam to dungeon, from clinking champagne glasses to the screech of iron rails that caged her in. Her second life doesn't crown her a queen... it chains her as a prisoner.
Our darling employee~(Yandere Various CEO harem x Male worker reader.) ni adventurefan2020
18 parte Kumpleto
(DISCONTINUED!) In a modern alternative world, there is a government job system where an employee from any workplace has the chance of not only touring six of the most powerful companies in the nation and world but also work along the CEO'S of those companies. But there is a catch to all of this, you have to stay with them for an entire month before you can move on to the next company and you will be 'persuaded' by other company representatives to join them with more intriguing benefits and such. If you fail to meet that requirement, then you will receive a "punishment" of god knows what and disappear without a trace and no-one dares to find out why as these companies have people to their grip in a way, so all workers both entry and pro all got to participate who some successful but others failed.. But you, it will be a different turn of events. You see, you are a simple humble reader who lives and breaths work, you enjoy your job and is kind and caring for both your customers and coworkers alike. One day, when your manager Lucy signed you up for the program, you thought that this was the most exciting thing ever to happen to you. Late that night, a phone call was all it took to change your life forever and now on the way to your first destination. However, along the way the CEO'S you work with begin to develop feelings towards you and it was not the healthiest kind per say and all begin planning out ways to win you over and be in their grasps forever. What is gonna happen, who will you win you over and will you survive in your new life and the new responsibilities and scenarios that come with with it? This is the story of a working man who simple life gets turned upside down and unknowably has their hearts wrapped around his fingers. Good luck~ Enjoy~
Hi, Doc ni DYOSAN_NYA
27 parte Ongoing Mature
Selena Cortez, isang confident at matapang na babae, dala ang bigat ng kanyang pamilya's wealth and legacy, steps into the unpredictable world of healthcare-only to realize na ang kanyang tatahakin ay mas delikado kaysa inaasahan. Mula sa paghahanap ng trabaho, napasok siya sa isang masalimuot na mundo ng deception, betrayal, at isang hindi inaasahang love story. In the middle of it all is Dr. Ace Reyes, isang charming at skilled na doktor na may sariling mga sikreto. Hindi alam ni Selena, ang koneksyon ni Ace sa mga kaaway ng kanyang pamilya ay mas malalim, leading to a dangerous plan fueled by ambition and greed. Through funny moments, heartbreak, at mga matitinding emosyon, Selena and Ace find themselves working together to unravel the mysteries surrounding them. Mula sa mga close calls hanggang sa mga taong hindi nila nailigtas, bawat hakbang palapit sa katotohanan ay nagdadala sa kanila ng mas maraming problema-at mas lalong nagpapalapit sa isa't isa. But with every secret they uncover, mas lumalalim ang pagiibigan. Kaya ba nilang lampasan ang lahat ng pagsubok? O tuluyan na bang babagsak ang kanilang pagmamahalan under the weight of betrayal?
Infinity x The World ni LunaLightfoot
59 mga parte Kumpleto Mature
Warning: this book's focus is drawn to a character who hints themes of depression and self-harm. The idea of the story is to present the experience of learning to understand and comfort someone through these struggles. So while these themes are contained within a comical styled story, they are still present so please be mindful of that before you read on. You. You're just a normal girl. A normal girl with a normal life... until you meet the boy with blue hair... Name: unknown Age: unknown Human? Unknown How can someone live a life without anyone knowing of their existence? You don't know. But you want too. Determination fills you with a desire to seek more about this boy. There's just something about him that makes you want to know more. He meets your eye. Is a name really too much to ask? He refuses to give you one. If you keep investigating, you'll get hurt. You'll be killed. You'll regret it. It's not a warning. It's simply the truth. You've been noticing strange things going on. He's not in any records. A shotgun fire?! He has wounds that heal all too quickly. How can a boy get shot and heal by the very next day? You want to know, don't you? Then simply allow your mind to go wondering into this book and discover the secrets behind the boy who no one knows. (This book is a representation of my experiences with dating someone with depression in high school. I wrote it while we were dating, subconsciously writing him into the character Infinity. I will say that I intend to rewrite this at some point to send a better message, as I feel some of the actions in this book are unhealthy reactions to depression, that I have a much better perspective of now) [I'm also working on a VN based on this story.... If my studies would stop getting in the way]
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The Standouts - A Critique Contest by PAULAPDX (Summer 2019 Edition)

6 mga parte Kumpleto

🛑 - CLOSED until 2021. ***If you're interested in my critiques, you might want to check out my weekly newsletter for opportunities to get a personalized critique. https://paula.substack.com/p/coming-soon Does your work stand out in an overly-crowded landscape? Does your story & writing shine as far as: ★ - Concept ★ - Voice ★ - Storytelling The Standouts is a fun, but hopefully helpful contest that can give you a sense of whether your story resonates with someone who's got some experience under her belt. Great! But who are you to judge? Fair question. This is not to humble-brag, but I've been critiquing and have worked with story development for quite some time, and I've picked up a lot along the way. ☙ - As an Ambassador, I work on content projects. ☙ - If you look at my profile, you'll see everything I've published so far has managed to standout in one way or another, whether by leading me to become a Wattpad Star; or by winning a Watty (twice!); or by being picked as a Top 10 in major Wattpad contests (twice!); or being featured. All I'm saying is I'm no slouch. I'm not brilliant either. But I've got some experience around what can catch an agent, editor, or judge's eye, and I'd like to share that with the community. ☙ - In another lifetime, I used to work for HBO in Development and at ICM (the talent agency) in their writers' department which means I understand how professionals quickly gauge whether or not they'll take a closer look at a work and/or make an offer. This kind of insight can be helpful if you're planning to submit your work or even just want to stand out more here on Wattpad. ☙ - I used to provide critiques for three writers, all of them traditionally published. They seemed to value my insight. Read the RULES, LOGISTICS & PRIZES chapter for guidelines. All entries get a brief assessment of their first chapter, with winners getting more extensive critiques. Sound interesting? Give it a go! 😊

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