The Refinement
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Last published Sat, Feb 25, 2017
Andrew Hart lost his parents at the age of 15, and not even a week later the world was overthrown by people who call themselves kings. Now Andrew and his two friends must hide in the city that use to be New York or else go where all other humanity had vanished off to; to the king's palace. Andrew has one week to fix everything, to save the world, and maybe even his parents as he's sent back in time by a crazy scientist. Can he do it; fix everything in only a week? You'll have to read to find out...
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Locked away in society cut off from the rest of the world, 16 year old Clarity suspects nothing. Each 16 year old is assigned a color, but if you get Gray, you are executed. Clarity knows above everything she will be Yellow. Being part of an "Upper" family, she has high expectations to reach. But when her ceremony day comes, nothing goes to plan. Her father disappears mysteriously. Her mother disapproves of her every move. Clarity meets a mysterious guy, who is determined to help her escape her dooming fate. How will they escape this society that watches their every move? Will they have a happily ever-after? Read the book to find out!
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