Internal Confinement

Internal Confinement

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[RE - EDITING] [UN -COMPLETED] If there isn't any contact between humans, there shall be no violence. At only the touch of a button, you can have your cake, decorate it, and eat it too! Ha ha. Everything you could possibly need is located in your compound! We kindly advise you not to exit our internal premises as it is dangerous out there. Any signs of rebellion against our peaceful lifestyle will not be permitted. Wishing you peace, A.I.P.A ( Artificial Intelligent Personal Assistant) Tassage Odelle lives inside, she stays inside and is forbidden to go outside. 2100 Brings a heavily flawed Anti Social age where most communication is done electronically and humans have lost their authenticity. But Alas this world is sentenced to a life where they will never bathe in the naked Sun. Tassage is a 15 year old human girl that is naive and sensitive. It's when she's been expelled from her compound that a precarious rollercoaster of events lead her to a new dorm, dorm F16, where she meets a seemingly friendly girl named Kora that welcomes her to her new life. All of a sudden she meets a boy named Gavriel, and her heart is slow to make up its impression of him but her brains are quick; The price for his pretty hot chocolate eyes is much too high. Besides he's Kora's crush which means he's off limits. But in their unexpected meeting Gavriel informs her of things she never imagined existed: solutions and exits, the Great Havoc and the Rivals, life inside and the undiscovered foreign territory that's outside. Join Tassage on her joy ride to find her true identity and the purpose she's been given. To feel feelings that cannot be felt electronically and to live life how she wants to live it.
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Through thick and thin the Law shall prevail. A new sense of purpose awaits us, children of light, in the land where it all began. The darkness in which we once cowered in fear, now curbed by the might of our endless light. Come, brothers, come, sisters. Let there be peace among the wicked, just as the Law dictates. Peace and certainty is all that you have ever longed for, little angel. A bright, stable future. A roof without holes above thy head. Acknowledgement and recognition of thy existence, feverish dreams of grandeur. Greed born from yearning, treacherous vines of rapacity taint your innocent soul. You seek a future that does not exist. Let thy fingers hold the fragile line between dream and nightmare. Let thy light navigate the path. Shall thee give in and falter, O' land of old, envelop his body in thy unending flame of chaos. Spit out nothing but an empty husk, the remnants of a smile once so bright. Shall thee prevail, O', Great Kazdel, I ask of you, the impossible - take mercy on the innocent. Don't let the radiance dim and don't let the mind turn bleak. Wake, young traveler. Bid thy farewells and burn thy bridges. It's time to say goodbye, curly head. Cross post from AO3. For a shorter and more on-point description, look no further! I had something silly written up before throwing it out in exchange for that wall of text upstairs. It's a little story "about a young, dumb sankta who's been dealt a bad hand at life, looking for his place in all this mess. The pointless search for a better future leads him far, far away from home, to a country forever ravaged by war and misery - Kazdel, the promised land where devils roam free and peace feels out of place." Anyway, it's quite lengthy, but hopefully enjoyable? Slide a comment if you want, I'll give you a tiny kiss on the forehead. Man, do I love comments. (Lastly, to point out, English is not my native language, but I don't think it'll be much of an issue ;3)

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