Critiques of Flames
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Last published Sun, Feb 26, 2017
Do you want a critic to put your story to the test? Do you want someone to hit your story with some brutal honesty? Then, dear friend, you have come to the right place.
I am not a mean critic, but I won't sugar coat flaws. If they are there, I will tell you and suggest how to fix it.
I accept all types of stories, and typically go on a critique spree every Wednesday and Sunday.
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