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Don't Let Go of That Hand
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Ongoing, First published Nov 25, 2013
So guys.. This is a story that I wrote in like 7th grade..... it's very embarrassing and cheesy in my opinion but it is what it is. The basic plot of this story is that a 17 year old girl falls in love with a demon/vampire and they get into a lot of trouble with demon stuff and shiz... Doesn't cuss at any point in the story... at least i don't think so (oh how innocent I was lol) ... but it does have sexually explicit content later on in the story and I will give a warning at the beginning of that chapter. Anyway let me know what you guys think please! I plan on actually writing another story (note: my writing is a lot more mature than it is here now..) I have no idea what to write about though so suggestions are appreciated!
Thanks!
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