As Delicate as a Rose (REVIEW)
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This is a review of the story As Delicate as a Rose by @friendme123456789 (which btw is a pretty cringey username). The review is meant purely for comedy and hopefully for the writer to get better at writing. This is in no way shape or from meant to "bully" or harass the writer
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