The Hypes X - factor Journey

I decided to make an X - factor Journey for a band that I wish to be in. (It's a made up band so don't go looking for it on YouTube!). So here's some info about them.
Reegan - blonde hair blue eyes 13
Hailee - Black hair blue eyes 15
Carlie - blonde hair green eyes 15
Brook - brown hair green eyes 14
Cieana - brown hair brown eyes 15
Maisey - black hair brown eyes 13
These six girls came to the X - factor with one dream in mind. To become a part of a band. They've dreamed of becoming famous ever since they were little. Reegan wanted to do it to get over her fear of singing in front of people, Hailee did it because one of her friends dared her to. Carlie did it because she wanted to know what it was like. Brook did it because she loved to sing. Cieana did it because people made fun of her voice and she wanted to prove them wrong. Finally Maisey did it because she was diagnosed with cancer and she wanted to sing in front of people before her time was up. All of their performances went well and they were straight off to boot camp. As soon as they were in the live shows things started to go down hill and weren't all that happy for The Hypes . After one of the live shows Maisey has to be rushed into the hospital. They had figured out that she hit way to high of a note and her blood pressure was to high so she died. With that The Hypes still performed. They performed for her and won. Being the youngest band to ever win the X - factor. Ages ranged 13 - 15.