Fixing Her Broken Pieces
Daydreamersdaze
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  • Reads 3,921
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  • Parts 20
  • Time 2h 15m
Daydreamersdaze
Complete, First published Mar 02, 2017
Mature
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'...she was enclosed in her own little shell that I felt I needed to open. I was curious to see her real character, how she acted, her flaws, her peeves, her fears, what she loved, her hobbies, her perfections. I was tempted to know everything  about her, yet I didn't even know her name.'

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She thought she was safe in the back of the class, hidden behind her thick kinky hair, and enclosed in her little shell of darkness. She thought that her life would remain a mystery and that all people wouldn't notice her existence. But to her surprise, someone was acknowledging her existence the whole entire time.

Ebony Blakeham was the average outcast in any average high school. She was happy with her label, until Luke Herron; the school's most adored boy, decided that it was time to get to know her. This was all a joke to Ebony, until Luke uncovered a deep dark secret that she didn't want to be discovered.

After her discovered secret, Luke finds himself wanting to peel away her dark shell  that she never wanted to open. He wants to be the positivity in her life no matter how much she didn't want it. He wants to fix her broken pieces.
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"Grayson, what are you doing?" I asked, slowly, walking into his house. He was sitting on a bar stool in the kitchen, facing the view of the city lights. Grayson was surrounded by open bottles of beers and alcohol. When he turned around, I did what most people wouldn't do, I looked directly into his eyes. His eyes were like a book, telling a story to ones who dared to look at them. Hurt, confusion, and sadness written all over his drooping, bloodshot eyes. He didn't answer me, making me step closer to him, "You okay?" I asked. "Yeah," he whispered with the rare smile I've seen only a few times through the time I've known him. Though this one is different. It was depressing. "No, you're not." He sighed. He didn't say anything back, but we both knew what he was going to say. He knew what he was feeling right now, even though he wasn't sober. He knew. "I wanna fix you." I whispered, shocking myself. His smile vanished, almost immediately. He looked away from me, his eyes back to the city lights, "Me too."He whispered. *•*•*•* Stereotypes shape today's society, especially with Grayson Watts. He's the schools bad boy, making girls go all over him, but I, Bailey Winters, or so I thought. I'm the girl that's usually too busy reading and doing homework than to go out and stalk guys. Somehow, Grayson and I cross paths and something about me made us become close enough to be called, 'friends.' With our new found friendship, I learned that bad boys, too, could be broken. Highest Rank- #27 in Teen Fiction 8/6/17 Made in 2015

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