Fixing Her Broken Pieces
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  • Reads 3,987
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  • Parts 20
  • Time 2h 15m
Complete, First published Mar 02, 2017
Mature
'...she was enclosed in her own little shell that I felt I needed to open. I was curious to see her real character, how she acted, her flaws, her peeves, her fears, what she loved, her hobbies, her perfections. I was tempted to know everything  about her, yet I didn't even know her name.'

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She thought she was safe in the back of the class, hidden behind her thick kinky hair, and enclosed in her little shell of darkness. She thought that her life would remain a mystery and that all people wouldn't notice her existence. But to her surprise, someone was acknowledging her existence the whole entire time.

Ebony Blakeham was the average outcast in any average high school. She was happy with her label, until Luke Herron; the school's most adored boy, decided that it was time to get to know her. This was all a joke to Ebony, until Luke uncovered a deep dark secret that she didn't want to be discovered.

After her discovered secret, Luke finds himself wanting to peel away her dark shell  that she never wanted to open. He wants to be the positivity in her life no matter how much she didn't want it. He wants to fix her broken pieces.
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#214 in bwwm

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Many people don't know me, but I don't know who me is either. I can't tell you if I'm the loud or rude stereotypical black girl because Mom would say I need to speak up. I'm using my library voice with strangers. I can't tell you I'm the introvert because I like good company. I was born into a world that judges me before they get to know me. And try to attack the concept of happiness. I need it most in this filthy world we live in. I need you. Because you listened and didn't say a word. Just you being there was enough to make me believe you understood the troubles in my sentences and words spoken in a foreign language. I want myself back but I can't remember who I was. || Ebonee desires life to the fullest content as a brown skin but is constantly faced with life's realities that can never turn into her sudden dreams. As she is constantly faced with comparisons of her beauty, cruel judgment, and love she didn't expect it to turn out so unplanned in her premeditated life. || || Then there's Beau, who lives such a different world outside of the way Ebonee sees it as he tries to determine who is his out to kill him. Living two different worlds in hope to find a middle ground, somewhere, between light and dark, in the novel of BROWN SKIN. ||