Nothing Left But Seven

It all started on the big day for the Nelson family. That day was the 10th year after Jeff and Tamara Nelson adopted four kids, Luke, Derek, Jolene, and Brandy, and became a complete happy family. But on that day something very dreadful happened to them. Strange creatures attacked the family during their yearly picnic and kidnapped the two parents while the four kids just barely got away. Lost and heartbroken the four children fended for themselves and soon found it hard to trust anyone.

Now one year after the event they are back at their devastated home and they find something hidden that reveals that their parents may still be alive. The only way to save them was to find and save seven unique people and bring them all together. So they all agree to go on this rescue and along the way they meet two girls who appear to be on the same mission. They join together and start their difficult adventure.

Why did these creatures kidnap their parents? How will these seven people be able to save the Nelsons' parents? Who are the two girls and where did they come from?

Please go easy on me. This is my first attempt on a story where I'm actually commited on finishing it. So please comment or vote and tell me what you think of the plot. This first part is just a snipet because I really want to see others reactions. I will try and update as soon as I can. Thank you and I hope you enjoy!