Unforgivable ||Louis Tomlinson||
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  • Reads 1,606
  • Votes 42
  • Parts 6
  • Time 14m
Ongoing, First published Nov 27, 2013
I was once in love.

I loved a boy named Louis.

He was the only one who get me, besides my best friend Lizzie.

Well, ex-best friend.

One day, I saw Louis and Lizzie...kissing. 

My two perfect relationships were over.

I moved to New York, where I got an internship at a radio station.

Two years later, guess who comes in?

Louis, and his new 'boy band' One Direction.

Evidently they're famous or something.

He didn't reconize me - mainly because I dyed my hair from brown to blonde, and got color contacts to change my eyes from brown to blue - so I decided to finally get revenge.

With the help of my new best friend, Tracey, and one of Louis 'best mates', I finally got my revenge on Louis - but with drastic consequences.

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