Broken Freedom (On Hold)

Broken Freedom (On Hold)

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Zoe Mitchell doesn't belong there. She's not a bad girl or a rebel. She's not one of those girls that, when you see them, you automatically narrow your eyes and shake your head. So why is she there? She doesn't know. She went to sleep in her bed one night and woke the next morning at Celzics school for Juvenile delinquents. Tanner Swane Has been at Celvics for three years now, and he isn't meant to be there either. So why is he there? That's for me to know, and you to find out. When Zoe and Tanner meet each other, they get an instant connection, but she denies it. "I slid my arm around her shoulders and slipped my black sunglasses on my face as we walked through the halls and towards the door leading to our freedom. I felt her straight brown hair crinkle under the weight of my arm, and our pace quickened. This is the day I have been dreaming of since I set foot in this school three years ago today. This is the day we get out. This is the day we get free. The door's getting closer and I can almost smell the fresh air that we have been so long deprived of. As we walk the corridor seems to get longer, the door farther away. We pick up our pace even more, bringing it to a run. The faster we go, the farther the doors get from us. I let my arm slide from her shoulders, leaving her standing behind me as I continued running for the door, hoping to catch it before it gets even farther away. My legs start pumping faster, my feet seeming to never hit the floor, I run as fast as i can, trying to reach the door. I'm almost there, my fingers almost hitting the red metal, I can barely feel it--"
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Taylor, a beautiful and young college student, ready to take on the world with her quick wit and incredible talent for reporting and journalism, soon finds herself in a sticky situation. Did she dig too deep into the wrong persons story? Tanner, a handsome and mature yet shy student studying law. He wants to go into the police force as a detective, possibly a private detective. He's only taking a few law classes for fun before he goes to the police academy. What will happen when they try to solve a mystery together? Will they help or hurt each other? Or along the way, will they somehow fall in love without trying to? ~ I say, "I'm sorry..." as my breathing is uneasy. "Don't be," he bends down to help pick up the mixture of books and papers and coffee I just spilt everywhere. "Are you okay? You seem disturbed." He lays his hand on mine and 8 can't help but look up, "Umm, to be honest, no, but that's not any of your business. Sorry again." I break the eye contact. "It can be if someone is trying to hurt you." He stops me again. "H- How did you..." I stop and am now looking him dead in the eye. "This is gonna sound creepy, but I've been watching you." He looks panicked, "Not in a creepy way though!" "What?" I keep eye contact. "I've just been observing you. That sounds awful." He looks and sounds even more panicked than before, "I mean, I think you're beautiful and I just didn't know how to approach you. I tend to be socially awkward with girls I have an interest in and I didn't want to scare you off..." He trails off, "But when I see you around, my gaze gravitates towards you," he sighs, "I sound like a total creep. I'm sorry." He pauses, "I've noticed you've been looking over your shoulder a lot and are in a rush in the halls. Almost like you're running away from something..." His eyes meet mine and I can tell he's being genuine, "I can help you." he says sympathetically. I nod and whisper, "He's always knows where I am and always knows my next move."

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