Brother's Grimm Mishap

This is the first short story that I had to do for my Creative Writing class. Just a couple of pages, so it's a fast read. Comment and Suggest!
"When I -- a proud owner of Wendy's -- came walking through the door to begin working my shift, I did not expect to become the victim of a possible murder. It all started with Mark, my longtime friend and employee, when he asked the simple question: 'Do we allow dogs?'"
*Self note: listen to the people who try to save your life*