Rise of Hell

Rise of Hell

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Last published Thu, May 28, 2015

We call you, mortals, from the four corners of Middle Earth. Come, come, to the Mountain to hear our tale. It is the year before the Thrun. They rise from the core of the Earth. They BURN the forests. They BURN the sky. They BURN the ground. They BURN our kings. They SIT in the thrones. They oppress our rights. Kill our armies. They treat us as live stock. And After 300 Years, I remember how it WAS, I have gathered enough strength, and the Prophesied One has come. I will find her and take her to her destiny. WE, the Four Flames, WILL LIBERATE ALL OF MIDDLE EARTH FROM THE RULE OF LOWER EARTH! P.S. Oh, and please comment, too. Thanks! P.P.S. Yes, I did take most of the chapters down. I'm revamping the story and rewriting it in classic narrative style. Please be patient and continue to leave comments on my writing or pretty much anything. If you like it, feel free to WRITE FANFICTION... *wink, wink, nudge, nudge* and please link it back here. Thanks for the support, guys!

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