The Quest for Melody's Cutiemark (Updating slowly)

I rlly need a better title.

A remake of this:
"Hi! I'm Melody, what's your name?" The other pony ignored her question, summoning her friends. "Is your name Melody?" The pony chirped, and Melody nodded, slightly weirded out. "Then sing!" She went on. "If your name is Melody, you must be able to sing!" "Sing! Sing!" Her friends chorused. Melody found a lump in her throat. "U-Uh.... I don't know..." she felt sweaty, and wiped her forehead with her hoof. "Maybe next time..?" The ponies groaned. "But your cutiemark! It's a, a, a-" The pony was taken aback. "You're a BLANK FLANK!"

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