The Jaws of destiny.

In a desperate attempt to save a nineteen year old Girl, Jake Sullivan finds himself staring into the eyes of death, litterally, when he finds himself clenched in the jaws of a Great White Shark. Fortunately, he survives, but his life is forever changed. For better or for worse, he can't tell.

This is my first book, and I am not so sure of how I am doing. So let me know how I can improve in the comments. Also, I really suck at capitalizing, so please overlook that. Thank You. I also can't say how often I will keep You guys updated, with jobs and all, but I'll try to finish this.