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Last published Sun, Mar 12, 2017
⚠CAUTION⚠ THIS BOOK IS VERY OLD AND CRINGEY I WAS ONLY NINE WHEN I WROTE IT ENTER AT YOUR OWN EXPENSE.
hey guys! it's yo dude dante! I'm onto my second story and it is going to hopefully be a long one.
now, to talk about the main character, Denise. Denise is a 16 year old girl, who has a big secret. Her newly discovered abilities. one day, her mother is killed in an explosion by someone seeking to kill her for her mother's past secrets, but her father was in jail. she ran away from the only sense of home she had left, and embarks on an incredible journey with her new, but old friend, Peter, the only other "freak" she knows. will Denise find her true potential, and help Peter find his family? or die trying?
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