Rogue: Part One

Well, I wrote this novel a while ago and haven't really re-reread everything that I had written before, but I had edited it once before so I'm sure it's not TOO horrid. I do remember how emotionally attached I had gotten to a few of these characters but my writing style has changed a lot from then to now, so most critics I'll probably agree with considering this, as I mentioned before, is a very old tale dug up from the pit of my saved files, but something I had been proud of before...I probably should reread it again...aheh...so, yeah. Enjoy. Or don't. :D