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#167 in Teen fiction on 24th March. Today, I saw a girl. A girl covered in black, plated with misery and eyes that were swollen and red. Today, I saw a girl face to face who was knocked down by someone, no one knows how many times, her eyes stared into mine, not averting, dreadly, wretched, full of despair. Today, I saw a girl. I tried smiling at her but she didn't, she didn't smile back. Today, I saw a girl, a girl demanding for answers, answers to "Why I stopped loving her? Why did I abandon her? Why was she left alone? Why did I hate her when once, she was the one I love the most, why?" Today, I saw a girl. A girl covered in black, plated with misery and eyes that were swollen and red. Today, I saw a girl. A girl, I see everyday in mirror. ▪◽▪◽▪◽▪◽▪◽▪◽▪◽▪◽▪◽▪◽▪◽▪◽▪ Hello, I am Aleeza Salian. I wouldn't have imagined myself to be telling my story until about a few weeks ago, but then one always finds a story when they find out a ground breaking truth... or a lie. In my case, there was both. My truth? I could be in love with a certain person whose father was supposed to be a person who died in an accident as MY father.There was also the awkward implication that I loved my brother - in not an exactly brotherly way... My lie? That would apparently be my entire life.
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"LOVE IS FAKE!" I shouted like i've never before.. i couldn't control my self. "I WOULDN'T HAVE DATE YOU!" "YOUR LIES, YOUR FREAKING LIES!" "ALL THE THINGS I DID JUST TO BE WITH YOU!" ~is love even a thing.. is love even real..if it was real then why does it hurt loving..?? ~ •• Misunderstanding, Fake love, untrustworthy. Niki didn't want to be the girl who just can't love her self either while she's busy loving someone else. But, liking one guy after a guy? Whoa. Dating your own bestfriend? Will Niki find the guy of her dreams? Will he be the right one? All these questions kept going in Niki's head. Why does loving hurt? •• Warning: A little bit of Mature Content so read at your own risk. Disclaimer: The first few ( a lot) of chapters are quite short, about 2 pages but then im trying to make them longer. As you start reading chapter 30 is where the real story begins. Before chap 30 are like fillers or intros. Hope you understand 🙂🙂 Oh and I wrote this story when I was young..so many grammatical errors like holy shit. and.. uhh.. yeah I wouldn't read it if I were you.. so.. Im only planning on finishing this story. It sucks thooo. PLEASE JUST DON'T READ THIS STORY. READ MY OTHER STORIES. THEY'RE BETTER I SWEAR. THANKS! xx THIS STORY SUCKS *Rolls away* BYE. -Yash lol

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