My Destiny

This is my first story that I hope one day I will finish it . The story is about a teenage girl named Marian Rose. She would face a lot of challenges in her life . Everything about her would change through the challenges. She would learn to let go and to accept of the things that she can't have no power to change it. I titled the book "My destiny" because it is suitable with the storyline that I am gonna write. The story might take a very long time to finish them because I don't have editor due of my lack skill in English . Anyway I welcome to any negative feedbacks that I would receive because I believe that will help me to improve my English writing and to correct my mistake . Your help is needed here .thank you.