The Thing In The Pool
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Last published Fri, Mar 17, 2017
It was a hot, crisp summer. Five kids discover a girls dead body in the isolated, public swimming pool that hasnt been used in years. Her hair is ripped of in clumps and her and her shoulders have cuts. Was an accident or murder?
"We weren't supposed to find her.."
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