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This is a short story I wrote for my Creative Writing class. I'm nervous about people reading it so feel free to make suggestions and point out where I've made mistakes!
Description: Melany Oscar comes home to find her house empty and her son Ben nowhere to be found. With the help of her ex-husband will they be able to work through their differences and save their son in time?
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