Beyond the Flame (Avatar the Last Airbender atla)
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"Let the energy flow through you."
Bre Yin is a sparky firebender with enough knowledge of the flow of Energy to bend the other 3 elements. (Confused? Turn the page.)
After the murder of her rebel mother, she is sent to an orphanage until she is adopted by the rich and snooty Lee family, who happens to be on the Firelord's military council.
She and Zuko become good friends. When Zuko gets banished, out of hatred for her new family, Bre Yin leaves with Zuko with hope for an adventure.
Soon she is faced with many troubles: kiddnapping, boys, losing her power to bend, and finally, ditching Zuko to possibly join the Gaang and save the world.
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I really want to do good with this book so constructive criticism is very appreciated.
I have the book planned out but I need to know if people like the plot and my writing style so far, so DON'T BE AFRAID TO SPEAK UP :D
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