Dark, Stormy Night ~written by a 9 y/o

Ok so this is basically a short story I wrote when I was 9 at school that I had to do for an assessment about these two kids who get kidnapped which is based on a book called Dead man's cove by Lauren St John (it's a good book you should read it)

enjoy :)
PS if this is popular I will post another story I wrote when I was younger although I'll probably do it anyway